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Author Topic: liquid kevin's journey  (Read 6351 times)

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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #10 on: May 29, 2009, 07:22:39 PM »
DUDE! some sick sick stuff there homie, doing some good shit. I would like to see you smooth out the transitions from your builds to everything else but i do like your ideas and how your playing with the concept. Keep up the good work man.
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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #11 on: June 02, 2009, 02:58:17 AM »
Thanks again every one!! for all the critics and nice comments ;)

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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #12 on: June 03, 2009, 09:28:55 PM »
For the clip with Yellow Tshirt - ur footwork was often and aimless walking backwards and forth. It doesn't really suit the developed movement of your upper body.  In other words, ur upper body movement looks good, but ur legs don't (in this clip, who knows what else u get up to, for all i know u are experimenting with 'walking liquid')

 second clip  -  dark clips suck balls! Seriously, how hard is it to record a clip during the day?
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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #13 on: June 03, 2009, 10:51:47 PM »
To SiFi
Thanks for critics.
 yeah my lower body really sucks... but i don't really know how can i mix my legs in liquid.
 should i do like boogaloo type of legroll stuff, do house type of steps or do liquid with them?

Sorry for the dark clip.
I useuly practice at night on the street, becouse the windows out side of the spot be come like huge mirror in the night.
Next time i will try to record my dance in day light thanks for advice :)
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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #14 on: June 04, 2009, 08:02:02 PM »
hmm if ur asking me what i would suggest for strengthening ur legs and pelvis?  i would say ballet + boog + sacking :) :)    get the strength, isolation, speed and flexibility from these disciplines and use it for complimentary footwork that is very simple but very strong. At least.... that's what i think.  And i think that's what im trying to do.

 do you always use a mirror for making clips?
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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #15 on: June 21, 2009, 08:54:34 PM »
Thanks Sifi! and sorry for really late reply.
My internet was really slow lately but its fixed.

I never knew ballet so I will try boog and  sackin.
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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #16 on: July 15, 2009, 09:26:33 AM »
Hey guy!!
I just made new clip.
I was trying to cover critics I got from before in this one.
But still working on reversing the flow i really suck at it.. oh well I hope u enjoy it!! 
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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #17 on: July 15, 2009, 09:54:20 AM »
God damn, you got good fast, in like 2 months. How the hell did you pull that off?

Amazingly clean, great moments of intricacy and cleverness, dynamic movement, levels, speed changes, footwork. You covered everything in everyone's critiques, I'm pretty sure. Wow, just wow.

0:45-0:55 was straight Code Red flow there. I haven't seen anything like that for a long while.

EDIT: I am regretting the adamant praise, I don't want to stifle your development. I wonder if you are capable of having more of your body involved in your flow, either through things like that leg contour you had there or splitting your hands apart and creating new relationships between the separated hands and other body parts.
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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #18 on: July 15, 2009, 10:30:43 AM »
Hmm what to say... ;).. That was absolutely crazy!!!

 
Quote from: roxy on July 15, 2009, 09:54:20 AM
God damn, you got good fast, in like 2 months. How the hell did you pull that off?

Amazingly clean, great moments of intricacy and cleverness, dynamic movement, levels, speed changes, footwork. You covered everything in everyone's critiques, I'm pretty sure. Wow, just

I'm with joon on this, its amazing how much progress you've made. Motivation right there to get my act together.

As you said, learn to reverse your flow a little more but overall excellent.
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Re: A clip of myself
« Reply #19 on: July 15, 2009, 01:46:18 PM »
your use of tension in this clip is really good.  you're very clean but it looks like you're straying into the land of moves (as opposed to conceptual movement).  that is to say, you're working on the perfection of a movement rather than exploring the possibilities of the underlying concept that makes the movement an illusion. this is grounds for very solid looking illusions, but repetition creeps in very quickly.

the arm-based waves are looking solid, technique wise (very tight isolations).  work in your transitions though, making the connect in a fluid manner.  rather than sending a wave out of one arm and then it coming back, make that arm connect.  you eventually got to this, but i'd like to see more of it.  to me, it doesnt make sense when a wave gets sent out of your left arm, and then comes back in via your left arm.  it makes me wonder "why did it send it out in the first place? how did it come back?"

really great progression overall.  keep that tension around, it's gold.
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