Hey man, Imo, u progressed since the last clip. Your coming along nicely if you ask me.  I like that little side step thing you did at 1:11 . Simple move, but it had style, it looked good.   

 hrm, advice....   well, I'd like to see you bring your liquid around your body more. You spend alot of time in that area directly in front of you, and dont really bring your liquid to your sides very much.  I'd like to see you bring your liquid over your shoulders, around your knees, to the sides of your hips, and etc.     

 Good clip :)

i dont have much to say critique wise either you look like ur on a good path man, just keep cleaning the isolations up....lookin for new paths...start making musicality more of a priority since uve got the tools todo so.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4NWRfX4DIBs&feature=channel_page

hey guys!
I made new clip.
I try to mix build and figure 8 concept.
I still not so used to both of them but I think i did ok.
and I try not to be so stiff time.
Would be great if u guys can  critique me again thanks!!

nice clip again :) i've tried to work figure 8 motions into builds as well and the only thing i can say about that is curves dont lend themselves well to builds, the curves of your figure 8 will have to be shorter and straiter like 2 rounded-corner rectangles next to each other. its good to see you trying to come up with advanced concepts though, keep it up man!

also i agree with joon on the angles/levels, get more acquainted with some groundwork.