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RichxFlows

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Re: Golden Delicious flavored liquid
« Reply #10 on: July 27, 2010, 01:19:09 AM »
Good job with grabbing the concept of digits. The best piece of advice i can give is just practice all you need. Strengthen ur fingers so they can do each individual wave with accuracy. Other than that i hope to see more vids soon :P
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Re: Golden Delicious flavored liquid
« Reply #11 on: July 27, 2010, 11:49:51 PM »
Clip 1: Sound hand connection but the abrupt direction changes kill the illusion. Tuck in your thumbs.

Clip 2: The illusion-based connection between your hands is not there. I can spot this because we've all toyed with similar ideas.

Overall very impressive for 8 months bro.

I would suggest practicing flow patterns in slo-mo and avoiding mirrors.

Also, posture and elbow positioning....

(I'm rusty on critiques)
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« Reply #12 on: July 28, 2010, 01:00:25 AM »
Thanks for the advice guys.

@HorrowShow, the chat we had opened up a lot for me. Thanks bro.
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Re: Golden Delicious flavored liquid
« Reply #13 on: August 09, 2010, 05:24:26 PM »
You are at a good place for 8 months. All the critiques are spot on. Keep practicing those digits everywhere.
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Re: Golden Delicious flavored liquid
« Reply #14 on: June 20, 2011, 11:24:48 PM »
Soooo... hi. It's a been a while. Nerves have been calming down a bit. Still getting over them. Next video I will have the technical issues resolved (low fps and the blurring) and my legs. I can finally watch myself objectively and not feel weirded-out about it. Which I think was more important for me than the actual dancing itself. I've made a lot of notes already, ya'll more than welcome to add to it. Thanks Jay for the initial feedback.

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« Reply #15 on: June 22, 2011, 03:24:08 PM »
I see u r working on ur cobra.  Per the advice of a respected peer I am doing the same.  I really liked the low slow controlled movement, but at times I think you could have speed up ur movement and picked apart the beat a bit more.  overall I really like where u r going.  I also really dig that track.  what's the name of it?
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Re: Golden Delicious flavored liquid
« Reply #16 on: June 22, 2011, 03:31:14 PM »
Song: Architect -Attack Ships On Fire. Thanks, Verb.
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