kudos :)
i enjoyed it more as time went on and ur musicality warmed up to the track, for the first minute or so u seemed lost with the beat lol. especially at the beginning, you were staying small for the most part when i really thought u should've been doing larger movements(maybe some groundwork, botting, and full arm to body waves) with the drums so spaced apart. from a technical standpoint i do see improvement from ur last clip your wrist and hands have gotten cleaner as birdage said already. and there were some interesting handflow points as well as the bigger thread u did towards the end.
by the end of several bars you seemed to be having too much time left before your next movement or not enough time and rushing to complete it. i definitely suggest you dedicate atleast a few sessions to timing and prediction of the beat. one thing i noticed is that alot of ur bigger moves were comming up a tad bit late which isnt an uncommon thing at all it still happens to me. what i do to correct this is say for example if i'm going todo a big horizontal split at the start of a bar, i will start that movement an 8th before it starts as the last one is ending because i know its going to take longer than a short stabby move. i actually do this for alot of my movements because they are wave-like and start at the shoulder, its a really wierd habit to get into, i've gotta make my own beat 1/8th before the real beat sometimes, but it works for me.
