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100 listens.. :/
« on: May 11, 2009, 01:32:18 PM »



Lol, well.. here it is.

I listened to this song many, many times. I had it on my phone, and I would play it around school and shit. Really liked that track too. Emancipator - First Snow. Cheers pwt.

I just did it last night before I went to bed. Yur.
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« Reply #1 on: May 11, 2009, 02:10:11 PM »

HOOOORAY!!!

The only reason I gave you that track (besides it's high level of dopeness) was to get ya to slow down some.  You did and I think it looks fantastic.  I could see you consciously taking the time to present your illusion.  I mean there are still things to work on but for the first time i saw some definite speed variations.  :)

Not the best with feedback either but DUDE! I say this is a step in the right direction.  It was need swapping songs with ya homes.
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« Reply #2 on: May 11, 2009, 02:41:45 PM »

Around 2:30 was the creativity I like too see. Things I've never seen. I like the way you use your thumbs in your digits. Also huge improvement from your other clips. Your on your way towards some nice digital liquid.   
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« Reply #3 on: May 11, 2009, 03:35:00 PM »

This is exciting. You're only 15! I wish I had that kind of talent and creativity when I was 15. If you stick with it, you'll be amaaaaaazing by the time that you are actually going out to dance, if you're not going out already.

While most of your handflow is still a little too closely and wavily connected for my tastes, it's clear that you're starting to get the feel of flow. I think it's like the difference passively letting waves move you around in the ocean and sliding down an icy luge. That probably doesn't make much sense. You have it for a split second at 1:45 and especially at 3:27-3:30. I could probably find some other time stamps but you get the idea. Splits are really the key. Maybe try a session or two of continuous, constant splits.

But really, you're doing great. Come a long way since the Spring Cleaning clip. 2:30 was crazy.
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Re: 100 listens.. :/
« Reply #4 on: May 11, 2009, 03:40:23 PM »

easiliy ur best clip :), winsauce here.

big improvement in musicality. you still have a ways togo but before you had close to none, along with the parts where u were hitting the beats, the dopest parts were when u slowed down.

your style could use some added diversity as well, specifically i saw a lack of rails/straighter and more isolated threads/and bigger splits. edit: joon reminded me of bigger hand distancing as well.

ur digitz are simply amazing for the level ur at. they pwn mine but thats not saying much lol.

great clip once again, really enjoyed seeing ur progression here and hope u keep it up :)
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Re: 100 listens.. :/
« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2009, 12:06:27 AM »

Shet gaiz. Have to admit, I feel really good after your feedback and stuff.
Thanks alot! :)

Birdage, funny you mention the thumbs. It's come into a very strage habit of me to always move them around and stuff when doing digitz, like i basically automatically do it. :P

And the thing with digitz, tbh, I'm pretty much always playing around with my fingers all day. In school; class, home. Even at rugby training lol. I get some good comments around school about them :D

Thanks for the advice too. Helps me heaps. tells me what i mainly need to focus now - splits :)


But overall, this just shows that me slowing down made the big difference :)






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« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2009, 12:15:31 AM »

HUGE!!!

Good on ya kid, can't wait to see some clips from ya in the coming months :)
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« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2009, 12:30:02 AM »

all thanks to you ;)
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« Reply #8 on: May 12, 2009, 11:58:54 AM »

The digitz stuff you did around 2:30 - 2:50 was cool to watch. And I agree with joon in saying that, you being as young as you are and being into this dance.... that really leaves an opportunity for u to get to a very high level by the time you turn 18.

One thing I would like to point out about your liquid though, is that you don't have that much arm flow. And you don't extend your flow paths as far as they could be going. Watch that arm flow thing that HgItch and see how he moves his arms around. Also, try continuing your flow paths as far away from your body as you can instead turning into a new path so early all the time. 

 Well, all in all, you are improving. And thats what counts. Keep at it. You have a lot of potential.
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