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tommy VFIII

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1,2,3,4.
« on: May 11, 2009, 03:12:40 PM »

Black Kids - Boyfriend (The Twelves Remix)



werd. heres my clip. i did alot of takes for this one over the couple weeks. after numerous failed attempts to try and come up with a 'funky' liquid style from scratch, i just gave up on that idea and went with my current stuff.

i posted 2 more versions of this @ my vimeo account(http://vimeo.com/user1522493/videos) cause i'm an indecisive bastard and couldnt pick the best between the 3. but ur not missing out on much if u dont watch them, they are only slightly different.
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Re: 1,2,3,4.
« Reply #1 on: May 11, 2009, 03:47:02 PM »

Your flow is ridiculous as always, but this time it seemed like you had more confidence with it. It looked slightly cleaner than before, and I think there were more variations (I don't really remember), but you look a lot more comfortable actually using it to where it's second nature. In any case, I loved what you did with the hard snare hits, like you didn't even have to think about it.

Maybe that is all because your body movements have cleaned up? It's hard to tell in the dim basement, but I'm pretty sure your body movements are cleaner.

Most of all, the shadows were really trippy. It was like you had 4 arms. You should put another light lower on the ground angled up so that you can have some Doctor Octopus 6 arm shit going on.

I guess my only suggestion is to put the focus on your overall body with angles and levels, but comparing this clip with your previous clips, it looks like you've been doing that. If so, keep it up.
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Re: 1,2,3,4.
« Reply #2 on: May 11, 2009, 04:18:03 PM »

I take notes b/c I can't do liquid well this way.   
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« Reply #3 on: May 11, 2009, 06:00:19 PM »

nice man ur cleanin up in all the right ways! 

 imo u currently have the most interesting, most consistent and least bullshitty hand/arm flow liquid. That may not sound particularly complimentary but it is! Especially the 'least bullshitty' part, that says a lot i think.

Oh, and i have found cleaning up to be huge so that is also supposed to be fairly significant. 5*
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« Reply #4 on: May 11, 2009, 11:14:00 PM »

Definitely thought your overall flow was great in this clip .  Not really gonna go into much detail for two reasons. One being that I thought the clip was dope anyways, and two, Im tired and will be spending an entire weekend with ya in less then 2 weeks. We will have plenty of time to talk then.
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Re: 1,2,3,4.
« Reply #5 on: May 11, 2009, 11:26:13 PM »

:-D  lots of improvement on cleanliness.  you're making more *end points* when your arms are fully extended, which is part of that cleaning up. dug the way stuff looked with the sleeveless shirt.

two things i wanna see:   use the space in front of your more (turn your rails 3d) and diagnol lines.
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« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2009, 12:21:46 AM »

Now i understand why they call you guns...

Probably the best musicality I've seen from ya to date.  Thought you played with the vocals in the track well and still freaked the beat like a pimp.  Dug done dig it and like Scooter look forward to Demf :)
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Re: 1,2,3,4.
« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2009, 12:27:31 AM »

so damn fluid!

im speechless :o
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« Reply #8 on: May 12, 2009, 06:00:21 PM »

Damn... i woulda killed for this track haha ;) But on the bright side i found a new track to listen too lol.

On the Flow note.... Dayam man your getting smooooooth as hell w/ your shit. I dig it man.
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« Reply #9 on: May 12, 2009, 07:21:52 PM »

This is the clip this makes this contest fun. The track is so different than anything I have ever even thought of dancing too. Great job on picking the track and great job on dancing to it.
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