Great start, I like your style! In some ways you have great musicality but you need to pay more attention to the mood of the music. Save your most energetic dancing for when the music is at its peaks. Also, work on isolation, especially with your armwaves. You usually drop an arm after the wave goes through it; keep it in place.
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