whoa u signed up quick lol, before i even finished my round of youtube comments
(hopefully) more critiques will come in later, sunday is typically slow around here.
not even sure what 'let liquid flow through ur body' means exactly, but this is what i say u should work on.
-slow down and clean up your handflow, fingerwaves, splits, etc. proper technique can be found on several videos here:
http://www.reddit.com/r/liquiddance/ drill it up(but dont confine yourself to videos on only those subjects)
- your flow is mostly confined to your front torso right now. take it other places namely your sides, behind your back, over your head, to your legs, and the ground.
-try to be less repetitive and do more continuous flow paths.
but yea not bad for 6 months and having (i'm assuming) little to no instruction. thats about where i was at 6 months right before joining this site. its really not hard get to an intermediate level and beyond as long as you put in the time and effort...welcome and hope u stay awhile :)