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kian

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Kian's Set
« on: June 08, 2011, 04:59:30 PM »

Childish Gambino -- Freaks and Geeks (Star Slinger Remix)
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« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2011, 05:30:13 PM »

nice homie :)

however much of the clip seemed rushed tho and i have the same thought about the other stuff uve posted. you have so many creative concepts and tons of energy... but alot of it gets wasted to the viewer because your going from one thing to the next too quickly. i'd really like ya to add more speed control, dimestops, emphasis/intent/presentation, and possibly character to what you have now... any of those things would take ur style to the next level, just my 2cents :)
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« Reply #2 on: June 08, 2011, 09:08:58 PM »

The first :30 of that is some of the best abstract dancing I've ever seen!!!
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« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2011, 12:49:55 PM »

man some next level tutting right there! great moves as always

but i agree with tommy, slow it down and put a little more structure/intent. If you improve your transitions and body movement, it will look exponentially cleaner and show more quality. people will appreciate your moves a lot more since you give them time to really notice them
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« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2011, 01:40:27 PM »

Thanks a lot guys! Yeah I've been really trying to work on slowing down and getting more control in general. Control of speed and stops all over. I gotta focus on certain movements and slow them down to make them cleaner. The transitions getting cleaner can come from me just gaining more control of my movements and figuring out transitions easier because my dancing is slower. Hopefully I'll be disciplined and keep doing it.
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